tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1674700354106399528.post7152322752576369106..comments2023-10-15T02:50:07.672-07:00Comments on Views of an Optimist: Sandra's Writers Workshop Hop #1 First Person I Have A Need For SpeedAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00747623369987517157noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1674700354106399528.post-23412114055091484862012-06-12T11:48:04.418-07:002012-06-12T11:48:04.418-07:00Yeah .. I remember those times when I was looking ...Yeah .. I remember those times when I was looking for job ... Here is my entry ---http://journeyofmylifendestiny.blogspot.com/2012/06/i-believe-that-if-we-meet-once-we-are.htmlJourney of Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14814279353807130008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1674700354106399528.post-139110628498702242012-06-07T06:09:06.913-07:002012-06-07T06:09:06.913-07:00This reminds me! I am an eligible bachelor and I h...This reminds me! I am an eligible bachelor and I hop around matrimony sites. Good luck to you for finding a good job and good luck to me for finding a good wife.Amit Herlekarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00602848175222451813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1674700354106399528.post-58575940602320699312012-06-07T06:08:04.412-07:002012-06-07T06:08:04.412-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Amit Herlekarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00602848175222451813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1674700354106399528.post-50988575293006305332012-06-06T19:53:18.364-07:002012-06-06T19:53:18.364-07:00Great post. Funny and first person....Great post. Funny and first person....Laura Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04484480915813337237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1674700354106399528.post-53138309000309054612012-06-06T19:19:16.473-07:002012-06-06T19:19:16.473-07:00Good first person narrative!:) where it really be...Good first person narrative!:) where it really becomes a "close" first person is with the paragraph about clock watching and Bart Simpson – here, it really begins to sound spoken; I can hear the voice, thus get a better sense of the character of this narrator; like in Updike's story "A&P", you just know, with that narrator, that it's a teenage by his actual language. To reall get closer, inside this character, you could add more of this kind of thinking, or reflecting on this whole exahausting job search. Great moment here that you could really open up.Sandra Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13191775335774130719noreply@blogger.com