The loft apartment was the top floor of a brownstone in the
So Ho district. The six flights of
stairs were wide enough to accommodate the movement of a piano. The four burly movers grumbled on each
step. Puffing and panting, they finally
made it to the sixth floor. There were
no windows or openings large enough to utilize the roof top hoist. That would be used for the appliances. She wanted new appliances.
He glanced around the room.
Organized chaos. The room seemed
filled with canvases. The canvases
leaned against one another while leaning against the wall. They were piled up beside the furniture. The canvases were everywhere. Canvases half
filled with paint. Half complete. Not finished.
Over and over he had begun to paint her.
Over and over he painted her shoulders, her arms, her slender hands……hands
used for playing the piano.
He glanced around the room.
The piano should be placed near the windows. Then she could see the view whenever she
rested from her exercises. She could
stop and appreciate the view from the top floor. It was worth the long walk up, just to look
out the windows. The piano should be
placed near the windows.
He glanced around the room.
He seemed in a daze, off within himself.
He could almost hear her playing the piano. He could see her long slender fingers glide
across the keyboard, pulling one haunting melody after another out of the
instrument. It had always seemed to him
that the piano was an extension of her, another appendage.
He glanced around the room.
He was bringing her piano here, finally.
He had promised her long ago, promised she wouldn’t have to trudge up
and down the stairs to her beloved piano.
He had promised her the new appliances so she wouldn’t be frightened
daily with lighting the old stove. He
had promised her that life at the top of the building would be filled with
music and the arts.
He glanced around the room.
He could nearly hear the last piece she was working on. He could “see” her sitting at the piano,
pencil in her mouth, as she found the song in her heart and plied it to paper.
The burly moving men hauled the precious cargo through the
doors. Noticing the multitude of half
finished paintings, one of the men smirked, “Stuck in a rut? Your muse died?”
He snapped back to the here and now. “Actually she did. Heart attack.”
Oh my! The ending was a surprise. This is great. Love it!
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DeleteHow beautiful. I felt his love and his regret.
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DeleteUnexpected ending...very nicely written. Creative, the way you started each paragraph the same. Good job!
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DeleteSuch a lovely depiction of "too little too late"; very nice.
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Deletelove that surprise ending; that woke me up this morning. Don't need that second cup of coffee:)
ReplyDeleteThat had a surprise ending. I was not expecting that!! Wonderful story. Simply brilliant.
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Did NOT see that coming! Nice writing!
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