BFF #228 - 500 Words or Less
So early, even the birds had yet to awaken. Wind barely rustling the leaves of the
trees. Dew drops hanging from fern
fronds just waiting to be brushed aside, loosening their droplets onto the yet
dry ground. Pearl laden spider’s webs
cross the walk path.
Drawing fresh water for morning coffee, tea and
bathing. Fresh water for the household
of the Lord and Lady and of course, all of their guests. The house was filled with well wishers for
the bride and groom. Relatives from all
over the county came to stay for the festivities.
This was the best time of the day. Her time of the day. No one else around. No mistress, no cook, no one ordering her to “get
this” or “fetch that” nor “be quick about it girl”. Esmeralda had the mornings to herself to think
as she liked about what she liked. And this morning, she thought she might like
to take the first bath in the water. Since
the bath water is always shared, until it’s so scummy even she wouldn’t bathe
in it, she would need to be extremely careful.
Drawing more water than normal would not be noticed since the entire
house was full.
Perhaps it was this very reason she didn’t notice the shadow
near the well. Resting her yoke on the
uprights, she began to draw the water bucket upward. The bucket swung back and forth, tipping much
of the water out, as she drew it upward. Hand over hand; she pulled on the well
ropes. The water bucket inching it’s way
ever upward. Finally, the bucket drawn
to the top, Esmeralda carefully poured
the water into her ewers. Once they were filled, she shrugged the wooden yoke
back onto her strong, flat shoulders, and toted the water to the kitchen for
heating. She would fill the vats several
times for all the baths to be taken this day.
Back to the well Esmeralda scurried. She was already anticipating the warmth of
the water as she would slide into the metal tub. She had sparked the fire for the stove,
wrestled with the privacy room divider encircling the bathing tub and then piled
a nearby table with all the soaps and lotions she could find. Many were mere slivers she had rummaged out
of the trash, but they still carried some fragrance therefore she was going to
use them. Contemplating the benefits of
using lavender over lilac, Esmeralda startled when something dark dashed across
the path in front of her.
“Damn cat, always getting underfoot. Like to trip you up and hurt yer self if yer
not careful like.” Esmeralda muttered to
herself. Talking out loud seemed to calm
her nerves. “Getting gittery will only
make you do something stupid, like drop the water and run.” Laughing, she shook her head at herself.
A thick spider’s web had sprung up across the path. “So quick, these bugs. Must be hungry
too.” Balancing the yoke with empty
water ewers, Esmeralda reached out a hand to brush the web out of her face and
hair. In the pitch black, she could not
see the shining eyes looming at her. She
had paused too long.
Leigh
Yikes!
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking the time to read my story. 500 words just hobbles me...gabby guts that I am! Thanks.
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