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#25 Hosted by Betty Today’s Baker
Her
hair was snow white, her hands gnarled, and shoulders stooped. She shrugged the wolf skin higher up onto the
back of her neck pulling it taut across the front of her. She could not move closer to the fire
tonight. It was her position to sit away
from the fire, high on the rocks.
She
was an Elder now. She had proved herself
on the last migration journey. She had
found good clean water when no one else could.
She had always been able to smell it, not unlike sister horse. The smell of water wafted on the breeze for
her.
When
she had dared to interrupt the Elder’s gathered for decision making, she had
blurted out the secret she had kept all those years, she could smell the
water. Not only could she smell the water,
she could tell if it was good water.
Those
old men had looked upon her with eyes milky with age. They had looked into her soul. Not wanting to take the tribe on a wild goose
chase. The Elders had decided to send a
few strong braves with skins to fill and return. She had the young men to water. Good, clean, healing water. The tribe had been saved. That was the last time she was known as Woman
With Club Foot. Her new name became,
Nose of Tears.
Many
had perished from lack of water on this journey. The creeks and rivers they had normally
stopped by were dried up. The flowing
underground well was fouled. It had been
a sorrowful trek for her kinsmen.
Nose
of Tears looked out over her family, huddled in the drafty cave. The wind picked up a pile of leaves, tossing
it at the people hunkered down for the evening.
The bats eyed them warily. This
was not her favorite cavern to camp in, as they traveled north for the warm
months. The wind was funneled and blew
out the camp fires as they were started over and over again. The wind then picked up the smoke from the
fires blowing it into everyone’s eyes.
Nose
of Tears was to tell her story tonight.
She was so proud. She would be
even more proud if Running Wolf had been able to witness this. Her husband had been lost on this sad
trip. He had protected the tribe from a
large bear. He had not survived killing
the bear with his hunting knife. She
proudly wore the claws of the bear around her neck.
Nose
of Tears was waiting. Waiting for the
tribe to settle down, wrap the babies in furs for the night, stoke the fires
one last time, and turn their attention to her.
Noting
she was waiting and that the tribe was anticipating, she nudged the young boy
sitting next to her, “Would you please pick a spot? Are you hot or cold? Move back away from the fire, just a bit,
pull the robe over you and you will be comfortable.”
Approving,
Nose of Tears cleared her throat and began her story. The story of how she saved the tribe.
leigh
Hot or Cold? I thought this was going to be about hot flashes, lol.
ReplyDeleteYou crack me up!
DeleteWonderful story and a very good take on my prompt.
ReplyDeleteBetty
http://todaysbaker.com
Thank you! I was trying for the unusual...no food.
DeleteVery nice! Hot and Cold...all about the fire and the honored position. I really like that.
ReplyDeleteI like that Club Foot saved the tribe and was revered for doing so...Nose of Tears could also be the name of a warrior whose husband had stinky feet.
Really wish I had thought of the stinky feet! Thank you.
DeleteWow-- loved this story. Very touching that she had the boy pick his position and she have him direction in doing so. I'm loving your stories :D
ReplyDeleteCheers, Jenn