What
Do You Value
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The
blade at my throat was all I could see.
I was certain small rivulets of blood oozed down the front of my
shirt. I was had. I was doomed.
“What
do you value?” My captor put to me. I could barely think. Sweat soaked my clothing from the exhausting
duel we had been dancing. My own sword
had clattered to the floor when I lost my footing on loose pavement. My captor pressed ever more firmly with the
sword hilt into my throat. Stars and
bright lights began to fill my eyes.
“I
value my life, I value my honor, I value my family, I value love, I value my
friends and I value good health.” The
words poured over my lips before I had time to think. Was this a riddle? I had heard the French held riddles in high
esteem. Had I just thrown my life away
with my honesty rather than think this through?
My
captor, Baron Von Bassett of Burgundy, slowly withdrew his saber from my
throat. He looked me up and down
again. “Indeed.” Was all he said as he sheathed his sword and
strode to gather up our horses. Leading
my horse to me, wordlessly to avoid any attention, he motioned I should follow
him.
Our
duel began in the dirty unkempt courtyard, after too many cups at the tavern,
over who would be heading out to slay the dragon who had been plundering the
village of livestock and youngsters. I
was surprised to learn the children were also being taken, I had thought
dragons actually preferred not to eat humans.
As it turns out, this particular village pampers the very young with
goats milk and curds long after most children are weaned. This, apparently,
makes them quite tasty.
The
trail the Baron had chosen was one to take us above the dragon’s lair. Over mountainous paths and through barren
windswept glens. Letting the reins
slack, Caballo followed our leader with a surefootedness I had not seen
before. Caballo had carried me and my
gear across many countries for many years.
I left the heavy lifting up to her.
When leaving my father’s home, all those years ago, I was given
Caballo.
Born
the third son of an aristocrat, my youngest brother, Pablo, was given to the
Church. My oldest brother, Ricco, is to
inherit. Leaving my next older brother, Ignatio, and I
to leave the family home and seek our fortunes.
A good horse, two pair of boots, a warm over coat, my sword, and of course a purse of gold; and
off into the wild unknown we traveled.
Ignatio
and I had wandered the countryside together for three years. One evening a winter’s storm caught us by
surprise. We hurried to an estate we
could see in the distance, hoping to spend the night in one of the many
barns. Much to our good fortune, the
Baron Zavala was extremely accommodating.
As it turned out the Baron Zavala, and his devoted wife, had brought
only daughters into the world. While the
three senoritas were comely enough, they just didn’t hold the pizzazz I might
need to settle down with a wife. Ignatio
was beaming when I left him, I only hope his joy is sustained.
leigh
wow, what a story! Well done, very exciting and thrilling! I was on the edge of my seat reading this, great post!! <3
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DeleteWow-- I was totally enthralled. I loved this...totally had me reading every word!!
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Jenn.
Amazing story. Loved it!! Completely brilliant piece of writing!
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http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
I liked this! It was fun and it was exciting. You do have a way of spinning a tale. good job.
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