Ghost
Story
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Crawling
into her older sister’s bed, Riley placed her cold feet on the calves of Braelynn’s
legs. “Man you are so cold! Snuggle
closer so I can get you warm. You are
gonna get sick if you don’t watch it.
Your feet are so cold they feel like you were walkin’ around outside
with no shoes on.” Braelynn was
guessing, but she was pretty certain her guesses were correct; her younger
sister had been outside walking around and not wearing any shoes or boots.
“I
got the lock off the back door. I scooted
a chair over and unlocked the top lock.
I just wanted to see him.” Riley
spoke into the back of Braelynn’s hair as she nestled closer to the warmth of
her older sister’s back.
“Turn
over.” Braelynn knew they were not going back to sleep until Riley purged her
story. Facing the other way, Braelynn
wrapped her arms around her younger sister, kissing the back of her head. Not only was Riley five years younger than
Braelynn so that she felt protective, Riley was special.
As
Riley warmed up, her story unfolded. She
had awakened to the sound of pebbles thrown at her window. Rising from her bed to investigate, there was
no one in the yard. She knew it had to
be him. He must want to see her as much
as she wanted to see him.
Dragging
a kitchen chair from the dining table, and standing on tip-toe, she could just
touch the lock her parents had installed to keep her inside and safe at
night. She had a bit of a history of
leaving the house in the dark of the night.
Their parents weren’t trying to be mean and hurtful, rather they were
concerned with her safety.
Once
outside, Riley forgot all about donning her shoes. She only had eyes for him. He made her feel so special. They investigated the woods together. He told her about the stars. She knew before anyone that Grams was gonna
get sick, he had told her.
“I
like it best when he shows up in his uniform.
He always smells good, like sugar cookies. He likes to show me the owls and how they fly
through the trees. Why doesn’t he want
to talk to you?” In her youthful
inexperience, Riley didn’t realize she was asking a potentially painful
question. “When he talks to me, he tells
me he loves you too.”
Only
then did Braelynn finally answer the question.
She finally told someone else her secret. “I see him too. I’m just smarter. When it’s cold outside, I put on shoes before
I go see Grampa Dale. He watches over
us. Some people call spirits Ghosts
while other people call them Guardian Angels.
I like thinking he’s an angel who loves us very much. Now go back to sleep and I’m gonna go make
sure the door is locked again.”
leigh
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ReplyDeleteLeigh-- I deleted my first comment because I should have addressed your story not the snafu I had with BlogFEST!! Okay--so I have to tell you that my all time favorite story to read is a ghost story!! You pulled me right in with this one. I love how Braelynn finds the ghost to be her Angel. Wonderful!! Thanks for sharing :D Jenn
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